Free LinkedIn cold email carousel template

Cold Email Teardown

A cold email taken apart line by line for LinkedIn: the old line, why it fails, the rewrite, then a before/after table and the finished email.

Opens in the editor: describe your topic and AI rewrites every slide in this design, or edit it yourself.

What’s on the slides

Slide 1
Teardown #12
This cold email got 0 replies from 400 sends
Quick question
Hi {first_name}, I hope this email finds you well! My name is Sam and I’m the founder of a leading AI platform that helps companies like yours… Do you have 30 minutes this week?
Slide 2
The subject line
✗ What they sent
Quick question
Every sales tool writes this. It reads as a pitch before it’s opened.
Slide 3
The first line
✗ What they sent
I hope this email finds you well! My name is Sam and I’m the founder of…
The preview shows line one. Make it about them, not you.
Slide 4
The ask
✗ What they sent
Do you have 30 minutes this week?
A stranger asking for half an hour is a big ask. Ask for a reply instead.
Slide 5
Before vs. after
Slide 6
The rewrite
Your 3 open SDR roles
Hi Dana, Saw you’re hiring three SDRs in Austin. Usually that means pipeline is the Q4 worry. We helped a 40-person fintech team book 31% more meetings without adding headcount. Worth sending you the 2-minute version? Sam
Slide 7
Want yours torn down?
Paste your worst-performing subject line below. I pick one for next week’s teardown.

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