Bedah Cold Email

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   Teardown #12

   This cold email got 0 replies from 400 sends

   Quick question

   Hi {first_name}, I hope this email finds you well! My name is Sam and I’m the founder of a leading AI platform that helps companies like yours… Do you have 30 minutes this week?

2. Slide 2

   The subject line

   ✗ What they sent

   Quick question

   Every sales tool writes this. It reads as a pitch before it’s opened.

3. Slide 3

   The first line

   ✗ What they sent

   I hope this email finds you well! My name is Sam and I’m the founder of…

   The preview shows line one. Make it about them, not you.

4. Slide 4

   The ask

   ✗ What they sent

   Do you have 30 minutes this week?

   A stranger asking for half an hour is a big ask. Ask for a reply instead.

5. Slide 5

   Before vs. after

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   The rewrite

   Your 3 open SDR roles

   Hi Dana, Saw you’re hiring three SDRs in Austin. Usually that means pipeline is the Q4 worry. We helped a 40-person fintech team book 31% more meetings without adding headcount. Worth sending you the 2-minute version? Sam

7. Slide 7

   Want yours torn down?

   Paste your worst-performing subject line below. I pick one for next week’s teardown.